- hard to tell characters apart as they switch in scenes without transition
- cara cambria? lana layla? it's too much same sounding names, and they are all b/w and samey.
- rip-off german names
- told from the perspective of an author who knows the characters, but doesn't manage to make them appear relevant, and stand out as persons
- combat looks sort of nice but there is no clue what to do, how it works, what the goal is.
- no auto-aim, auto-fire, target lock, sense of belonging...