English translation feedback thread

[RegalStar]

If you spot typos, grammar errors, awkward phrasings, etc. , post them here.

[Alphabrain]

Very minor thing I guess, but Heart fragment would convey the reference to Zelda a bit better than Life. One thing I very much like in this game are the references to all the past's RPGs and how it was all done in good humor.
https://imgur.com/8LJG6jX

[RegalStar]

Originally posted by Alphabrain:

Very minor thing I guess, but Heart fragment would convey the reference to Zelda a bit better than Life. One thing I very much like in this game are the references to all the past's RPGs and how it was all done in good humor.
https://imgur.com/8LJG6jX

A lot of these names were intentionally changed to less exact references for the Steam release, presumably to avoid trouble. This item in particular is one of them.

[neemoos]

This is an old one (and IIRC there was a reason to have remained the way it is, though I can't remember what was it exactly), but Judas Pain still incorrectly states that it provides +1 MP Recovery (instead of +2).

[Alphabrain]

Oh thats a shame, but understandable!

[RegalStar]

Originally posted by neemoos:

This is an old one (and IIRC there was a reason to have remained the way it is, though I can't remember what was it exactly), but Judas Pain still incorrectly states that it provides +1 MP Recovery (instead of +2).

Noted.

[PureRok]

Found a grammar error in the first sentence here. Should be "why did she" instead of "why she did".
https://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=2627375917

[qazmlpok]

Originally posted by PureRok:

Found a grammar error in the first sentence here. Should be "why did she" instead of "why she did".
https://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=2627375917

Got that one. Thank you.

[PureRok]

Found another error here in the first sentence.
https://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=2628095177

[RegalStar]

Originally posted by PureRok:

Found another error here in the first sentence.
https://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=2628095177

Got it

[Shylaar]

Cirno's Beloved Tomboyish Girl skill says "Upon the user's turn, all enemies will have their SPD reduced by (SLv*4)%". After seeing it not do anything on many of her turns I looked at the wiki, and there it's said that it's only a chance for that to happen on her turn, not a guaranteed thing. I don't know if this is a translation problem or if it was like that in Japanese, but the description is misleading.

[RegalStar]

Originally posted by Shylaar:

Cirno's Beloved Tomboyish Girl skill says "Upon the user's turn, all enemies will have their SPD reduced by (SLv*4)%". After seeing it not do anything on many of her turns I looked at the wiki, and there it's said that it's only a chance for that to happen on her turn, not a guaranteed thing. I don't know if this is a translation problem or if it was like that in Japanese, but the description is misleading.

The original Japanese text also just says "will be reduce" with no mention of a chance. I don't know if these passives have 100% base chance by default (I faintly remember seeing Yukari's similar skill failing on 0 resist enemies so they probably aren't), but I know for sure at least that they are affected by enemy debuff resistances as per normal, so anything that's resistant to SPD debuffs will have a hard time getting debuffed by that passive as well.

[Martin-Moonlight (Kuilfrayt)]

Two small errors when recruiting Kasen.

Well, we're really happy to increase our party, but can you just please keep to your preaching to a minimum...

Kasen Ibara joined the party!
Pretty sure it should be Ibaraki

[RegalStar]

Originally posted by Martin-Moonlight (Kuilfrayt):

Two small errors when recruiting Kasen.

Well, we're really happy to increase our party, but can you just please keep to your preaching to a minimum...

Kasen Ibara joined the party!
Pretty sure it should be Ibaraki

Fixed those. But don't you have access to the game text sheet as well

[Martin-Moonlight (Kuilfrayt)]

Originally posted by RegalStar:

Originally posted by Martin-Moonlight (Kuilfrayt):

Two small errors when recruiting Kasen.

Well, we're really happy to increase our party, but can you just please keep to your preaching to a minimum...

Kasen Ibara joined the party!
Pretty sure it should be Ibaraki

Fixed those. But don't you have access to the game text sheet as well

Wasn't actually sure if we made the corrections to the sheets, I'll update them if I see more errors

[LostProperty771]

The item "Portable Oscillation Cannon" is a reference to Full Metal Daemon Muramasa, which is now available in English, so I got in touch with its editor for a description of it that matches the official translation to preserve the reference.

Vibrocannon
A weapon of surpassing might wielded by the most recent mass-production Tsurugi models.
Combines ease of use with incredible power output; armed with a vibrocannon, any soldier is capable of felling a shin'uchi and its musha.
Ushered in the end of the era of heroes.