My first level
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Biggy 23. led. 2013 v 6.06 odp. 
Good for a newbie. Confused me a bit, but easy solution. Nice work.
Sergio Pacheco 23. led. 2013 v 8.24 dop. 
Good map for been your first one. It's a little easy maybe but that's ok. It sucks that if you die in the second part you have to do again the first one, Anyway, keep the good work!
s_awesomeness 22. led. 2013 v 6.00 odp. 
Great chamber! Love it.
Afterbirth 22. led. 2013 v 12.04 dop. 
Good job.. only took a minute tho, so you might work on that.
Shazzm 21. led. 2013 v 3.22 odp. 
Pretty good! Try and fix up some of the shortcuts!

Check out mine!:
SWilliamM(The AbyssWlaker)  [autor] 20. led. 2013 v 6.37 dop. 
in community chambers, singleplayer, There is not need commands or anything like that
Spriteinmyeye [2013] 20. led. 2013 v 5.24 dop. 
When i have pressed subscribe...
Do i launch portal 2 and the mpas will be there..
Or do i need the console or something?
please help!
daloboy 19. led. 2013 v 11.31 dop. 
Ok for a first one! As toncica mention, you could easily update it to prevent shortcuts!
Please try one of mine and comment! Thanks.
SWilliamM(The AbyssWlaker)  [autor] 19. led. 2013 v 11.04 dop. 
no friend I do not steal ideas, I'd rather not do anything to steal an idea, you're a little crazy :3
457zim 19. led. 2013 v 10.33 dop. 
>:( you stole my ideas!! ... its ok don't worrie about it, this might have been made before my levels, but if not ... then there really isnt anything i can do, YOU KNOW WHAT JUST IGNORE ME IM CRAZY TODAY :P
jaytinklin 19. led. 2013 v 6.54 dop. 
HOW DO I PLAY THIS?? LOL. it looks like a good map but i cant find out how to play it!!!
rhl44 19. led. 2013 v 6.11 dop. 
Wow, this was fun for a first one. keep on going.
krogruf 19. led. 2013 v 12.37 dop. 
it's a good map better then i can make
SupraMayro 18. led. 2013 v 8.39 odp. 
First community map I've played, and I like it. Nice job :)
LunaticTurtle 18. led. 2013 v 9.56 dop. 
I had fun playing your level...your first level, good job
Mr Fraggle (UK) 18. led. 2013 v 3.55 dop. 
Interesting solution toncica but I will still add 'Nice map.well done'.
StrangeTamer 18. led. 2013 v 12.14 dop. 
easy and well done. check mine out if your interested, its my first as well
toncica 17. led. 2013 v 9.59 odp. 
In before Mr. Fraggle's "Nice map. Well done." ;)

Call me paranoid, but I find it strange when a map has more ratings than subscribers...
As for the map itself, nice title, very unique. What's the name of your second map gonna be? This isn't a bad map (for a first try), I would say you put more than average thought into your first map. Fairly easy but that's ok.

If you continue making maps you might want to make sure there are no shortcuts in your map. There's quite a number of details you should pay attention to. You are probably not aware of most of them yet. Here's an example:

And here's my original run solving the map as intended:
Unicarn 17. led. 2013 v 6.03 odp. 
Nice! I will look for more from you! Also you should change the title but say it's your first in the description. This was very unique and enjoyable. Favorited.
mr.white 17. led. 2013 v 4.05 odp. 
Pas mal ;o)
Andi 17. led. 2013 v 3.01 odp. 
Clean and simple. Not bad for a first try.
club 17. led. 2013 v 1.43 odp. 
Pretty easy and fun
SWilliamM(The AbyssWlaker)  [autor] 12. led. 2013 v 8.04 dop. 
pues no es la gran cosa pero pues hay voy XD
Tomsthreem 11. led. 2013 v 5.05 odp. 
Cuando lo descarge de nuevo lo juego :)