New Skyrim Mod Video Series

[Sniper]

Hi, everyone! I am starting a new series to showcase mods and I would really like your opinions on it. I know it's not very good right now, but that's why I'm doing this. Please comment and let me know what I could do to make the series better. I don't expect to get many subscribers right now because it does kinda suck at the moment, and I don't really do much other than explain things this episode, so would really just like your thoughts and opinions.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kEHhRKlNmt4

[D'rael]

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[Aporia]

Good video. Only bad thing was that the into needs to be a better

[D'rael]

You have spent THREE MINUTES explaining what you are going to be explaining, without actually explaining it. Listen. I am a Broadcasting and Production Technology student, and one thing YOU MUST UNDERSTAND is that if you aim to publish videos or audio, you MUST get to the point quickly. People have very short attention spans, and you lost them all two and a half minutes ago...

Also, you loaded the wrong save, and instead of editing it out, you just left it in, which makes the video longer, and of less quality. You started to list your mods, and then said "uhhhhhhh I forgot"... You have to PLAN your videos man, and have a script to go by.

Don't stop making videos man, but spend twice as long planning, and half as long talking. You will get the hang of it. Also, get in the habbit of making ten minute videos, and them plan out five things to cover, and give each two minutes. Little things like that make your presentation go WAY up.

[Sniper]

Thanks guys! I appreciate the feedback. The intro was better before it was uploaded. I'm looking into how to improve it.
Also, I know I'm bad at explaining stuff, but I am trying to get better. I had a rough layout in my head for what I was going to talk about and how I would say it, but I'll spend longer on that in the future. I know I kinda abandoned what I was talking about a few times, but I felt like that was better than saying "Uh...hold on...uhm...Oh I remember!" over and over again. I already said "Uh" in every other sentence XD
Practice makes perfect though, right? Also, now that I got all the explaining out of the way, I should be able to just talk about what's happening on screen rather than the technical stuff.

Again, I really appreciate your feedback and comments!