Team Fortress 2
"A Journey In The Gravel War"
this is a prepositional peom based on TF2 that i made in school that my class really liked so i though i'd share it with you guys,enjoy.

"In the trenches,
Between the gravel pits,
Between the dust bowls,
Near the rocket fire,
Under the barb wire,
Around the control point,
Inside the badlands,
Beyond the resupply lockers,
Through the teams of mercenaries,
Around the fence,
Inside 2Fort""Is the intel, ready to be captured."
Last edited by Sergeant Maggot; May 9, 2014 @ 6:43pm
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Soviet May 9, 2014 @ 5:18pm 
What the-

Google won't even TELL me when a prepositional poem is. What is this, for some middle school English class?






You misspelled mercenaries.
Jingle Pyro May 9, 2014 @ 5:23pm 
Now I'm no expert on poems, but I'm fairly certain you don't need to put every line in quotations. One at the beginning and one at the end will do fine.

Also, 7/10 it wasn't terrible.
GarneTsN May 9, 2014 @ 6:37pm 
Not bad.
Mercenaries is spelled wrong, and it only rhymed once.
7/10
Sergeant Maggot May 9, 2014 @ 6:46pm 
thanks for the politeness, i have corrected the spelling mistake on mercenaries and removed most of the quotation marks besides the beginning and the ending ones.
Tomix (Banned) May 9, 2014 @ 6:52pm 
Seems pretty good, 8/10
Just out of curiosity, do your classmates play videogames or something? If that was my old high school they'd have just called me a faget and the teacher would've given me, like, a 30%.
GarneTsN May 9, 2014 @ 6:53pm 
Originally posted by Tomix:
Seems pretty good, 8/10
Just out of curiosity, do your classmates play videogames or something? If that was my old high school they'd have just called me a faget and the teacher would've given me, like, a 30%.
Same here, except they'd complain about how it didn't have Call Of Duty in it.
Sergeant Maggot May 9, 2014 @ 7:05pm 
actually they are not gamers at all and this was the peom my teacher liked the best
Tomix (Banned) May 9, 2014 @ 7:08pm 
Originally posted by {TF2BT}Sergeant Major DFS:
actually they are not gamers at all and this was the peom my teacher liked the best
What were the other poems like?
Sergeant Maggot May 9, 2014 @ 7:12pm 
mostly things about life,pets,themselves etc.
I had a poem about Portal,but I don't remember how it went.
K0rg May 9, 2014 @ 9:50pm 
So pr0
He needs a
★ Conga ★ (Banned) May 9, 2014 @ 10:23pm 
Originally posted by {TF2BT}Sergeant Major DFS:
this is a prepositional peom based on TF2 that i made in school that my class really liked so i though i'd share it with you guys,enjoy.

"In the trenches,
Between the gravel pits,
Between the dust bowls,
Near the rocket fire,
Under the barb wire,
Around the control point,
Inside the badlands,
Beyond the resupply lockers,
Through the teams of mercenaries,
Around the fence,
Inside 2Fort""Is the intel, ready to be captured."

It doesn't have a proper ending nor is it telling me what the poem is based about.
If you want to post a poem it has it be atleast year 7-8 level
Ruka May 10, 2014 @ 12:05am 
This is awful.
konkeydong May 10, 2014 @ 1:29am 
Originally posted by Solaire of Astora:
This is awful.
-10/10 would ♥♥♥♥ on again
Originally posted by DemoPan:
Originally posted by {TF2BT}Sergeant Major DFS:
this is a prepositional peom based on TF2 that i made in school that my class really liked so i though i'd share it with you guys,enjoy.

"In the trenches,
Between the gravel pits,
Between the dust bowls,
Near the rocket fire,
Under the barb wire,
Around the control point,
Inside the badlands,
Beyond the resupply lockers,
Through the teams of mercenaries,
Around the fence,
Inside 2Fort""Is the intel, ready to be captured."

It doesn't have a proper ending nor is it telling me what the poem is based about.
If you want to post a poem it has it be atleast year 7-8 level
It is a never ending battle and it is based on the B.L.U. and R.E.D. teams fighting over the land.
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Date Posted: May 9, 2014 @ 4:00pm
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