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Tek. 2013年7月27日 2時12分
Awesome SFM Art
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Rodger; Praise thy Murray! 2013年7月27日 16時46分 
Storm 2013年7月27日 17時23分 
Rodger; Praise thy Murray! 2013年7月27日 19時23分 
Woah. That was awesome. I am positive that would make a great nominee, but there are a few thing, if you don't mind constructive critisism: The camerawork could use some extra polishing. It is one of the main assets to what makes this video so awesome. Only some parts need some extra work. Next, and this one is a thing that always needs to be perfected, the poses of the characters in this video. Last of all: Those special little things that, if done right, arn't even noticeable, but really make the video look good. Such as lighting, particles, and even some of the rendering. If you want, I could even help with some of the things in this video to slightly improve it, almost like peer editing. I mosly make poses and build particles, and I think I'm also pretty good with lighting. My "Wall of Posters" (as I call it) is in the link above your movie. You should check it out! (The nightime sky you see in some of them is a particle I built) So if you want my help, awesome, thanks, and if not, I understand, and don't mind. Either way, this is an awesome vid, and I hope you continue to make movies with SFM. Cheers!
Storm 2013年7月27日 21時58分 
Rodger Phillips の投稿を引用:
Woah. That was awesome. I am positive that would make a great nominee, but there are a few thing, if you don't mind constructive critisism: The camerawork could use some extra polishing. It is one of the main assets to what makes this video so awesome. Only some parts need some extra work. Next, and this one is a thing that always needs to be perfected, the poses of the characters in this video. Last of all: Those special little things that, if done right, arn't even noticeable, but really make the video look good. Such as lighting, particles, and even some of the rendering. If you want, I could even help with some of the things in this video to slightly improve it, almost like peer editing. I mosly make poses and build particles, and I think I'm also pretty good with lighting. My "Wall of Posters" (as I call it) is in the link above your movie. You should check it out! (The nightime sky you see in some of them is a particle I built) So if you want my help, awesome, thanks, and if not, I understand, and don't mind. Either way, this is an awesome vid, and I hope you continue to make movies with SFM. Cheers!

Thanks a bunch! :)
by camera movement do you mean more smoothing?or change of direction?
any constructive critisism is highly welcomed,
what else do you think it needs specific?
最近の変更はStormが行いました; 2013年7月27日 23時33分
Storm 2013年7月27日 23時33分 
well i'm definetly following ur advice and working with more lights and particals, i'll post the remake soon
Rodger; Praise thy Murray! 2013年7月28日 0時08分 
Toasty の投稿を引用:
well i'm definetly following ur advice and working with more lights and particals, i'll post the remake soon
Awesome! What I meant by camera is it needs a little bit of smothing at some parts, but not too much, because it's great. I think one of the main things that should change is the demo when he is shooting the stickies. That pose needs some work, with him holding the beer in a more casual position, and his face should be in a way that looks as if he's drunk. His launcher and hand should also be raised to where it looks as if there was a slight recoil in the shot. Also, in that scene with the pyro in the tunnel, he needs a bit of orange-ish light on his chest, but try not to light his whole head, only the bottom half. And at the beggining, you should make the camera pan up, rather than up and left, then back to the right. I hope in no time you'll be wacking people with a golden statue in game!
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