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Sir Dirge of Cykaland 2013년 10월 26일 오후 9시 55분
My first Source film (Act 1)
My TF2 movie will be split into seperate parts first then will be joined into one movie. Here is the first part: http://store.steampowered.com
Sorry about the animations at some points, Source was glitching out at points. Feed back would be nice.
Edit: I was wondering, should I continue with this story?
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Sir Dirge of Cykaland 2013년 10월 26일 오후 11시 17분 
Uh..... shouldn't there be some comments by now?
Psi 2013년 10월 27일 오전 12시 56분 
hmm.. kind of hard to know where to begin in terms of feedback. But don't be "sorry" about your animation. it's evident that you're very much a beginner. You will improve if you keep at it.

I guess i'll just say one important thing is to start using lights more often. Like in every scene. There were a couple scenes where you had a light on the character, but it'd be too bright and not well placed. Start practicing working with lights a lot more. Your characters should always have some kind of lighting on them... just make sure to dim it a bit from the default setting because it looks like a flashlight when you first create it.
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Sir Dirge of Cykaland 2013년 10월 27일 오전 12시 56분 
Psi님이 먼저 게시:
hmm.. kind of hard to know where to begin in terms of feedback. But don't be "sorry" about your animation. it's evident that you're very much a beginner. You will improve if you keep at it.

I guess i'll just say one important thing is to start using lights more often. Like in every scene. There were a couple scenes where you had a light on the character, but it'd be too bright and not well placed. Start practicing working with lights a lot more. Your characters should always have some kind of lighting on them... just make sure to dim it a bit from the default setting which looks like a flashlight when you first create it.
Ok thanks. I'll take note.
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