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[SFM] "The Ambush" - TF2 Shortfilm
Pls rate my first Video using the SFM! :) (green thumb is for free ;) )
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EmperorFaiz.txt Oct 20, 2013 @ 3:12am 
This is pretty good. The soundtrack is totally perfect with scene but you need to improves the lipsync and the animations looks kinda static. Keep the good work.
raptornx01 Oct 20, 2013 @ 3:32am 
The music, the filtering, the atmosphere, the camera work, all awesome. and especially loved the little thing of the spy cloaking in the background as the soldier is walking, very creepy.

But as said, the lipsync can use work, and the actions are stiff. the soldier's punch, especially, there should have been more build up, more wind up to it.

Even still, there is alot to love in this and alot of potential here.
Pte Jack Oct 20, 2013 @ 6:25am 
Browser error, the dag HTML5 bug in Steam. Can you post an actual link?
raptornx01 Oct 20, 2013 @ 7:00am

See, this is why i come here through the web browser. XD
Last edited by raptornx01; Oct 20, 2013 @ 7:01am
The Resonte! Oct 20, 2013 @ 8:45am 
I'm gonna be totally honest here
the intro was obnoxious (With your name and the "Subscribe for more")
voice sync needs work
and at the end one of the hands of that person was bent the wrong way
and stiffness

that being said it was pretty well done
R234 Oct 20, 2013 @ 12:01pm 
Where d'you get the Soldier's walk cycle? It looks eerily similar to Niko's from GTA4...
psi onix Oct 20, 2013 @ 3:25pm 
Originally posted by R234:
Where d'you get the Soldier's walk cycle? It looks eerily similar to Niko's from GTA4...

it's probably the one MaxofS2D made i assume. a lot of people been using it.

btw cool video. Some of the slow motion / time pausing seemed to go on for a little too long and i agree the punch needed more wind up.
preety awsome, just change the toy part, or at least explain it to me :D
c-rock Oct 20, 2013 @ 6:51pm 
I am going to critiziz (i can't spell well) you.
1. something flet off on the solders walk cycle.
2. the spy's arm was in the same possition for way too long.
3. lip sync needs work.
4. it didn't fell natural.
5. too much slow-mo

Now to the complaments.
1. nice animation.
2. great time to show the spy's.

Tip: make the solder more worided. 8/10
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Date Posted: Oct 20, 2013 @ 3:02am
Posts: 9