WitchTaunter Jun 16, 2014 @ 7:31pm
Constructive Criticism for "First" video
First video after watching basic tutorials and practicing various elements of animation.
I'd like some constructive criticism from people who know more than I do. Granted, my video focuses on random actions that may not align with proper animation (Mostly Shrek) but I would like thoughts on the animation, lighting, effects, sound, and camera use.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Aadr0LJP-ZA

Now that I know at least, the basics, I definately plan to watch tips and other instructional videos.
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EmperorFaiz. b0ss Jun 16, 2014 @ 8:47pm 
2spooky4me.
Pretty good, bro/sis. You definitely need to learn more making better and smooth animations and stuff. Need better lightings and the camera needs improvement too. Keep it up!

SHREK IS LOVE. SHREK IS LIFE.
[G.o.D.] Strashniy Velikhan Jun 16, 2014 @ 9:14pm 
Hmm, the footsteps for Shrek appearing need some work (they are not alligned with the walk he jus did), but because this is for humerous purposes, I guess it's pretty cool! :/ Not familiar with the Shrek is Love, Shrek is Life thingy, but oh well. Still funny!
WitchTaunter Jun 16, 2014 @ 9:53pm 
Originally posted by EmperorFaiz (FIFA FEVER):
2spooky4me.
Pretty good, bro/sis. You definitely need to learn more making better and smooth animations and stuff. Need better lightings and the camera needs improvement too. Keep it up!

SHREK IS LOVE. SHREK IS LIFE.

My computer isn't exactly top notch, so upon adding lights to any scene my computer can't handle it and lags like crazy. It is usually a "hit or miss" scenario since I can't go back to fix it.
Lighting will be a difficult thing to learn, but thanks for your opinion!

Originally posted by G.o.D. Strashniy Velikhan:
Hmm, the footsteps for Shrek appearing need some work (they are not alligned with the walk he jus did), but because this is for humerous purposes, I guess it's pretty cool! :/ Not familiar with the Shrek is Love, Shrek is Life thingy, but oh well. Still funny!

Hmm, really? I stared for a long time at the short run cycle I made for scout in the beginning feeling it was strange, but I never looked twice at Shrek's short walk. I guess leave it to others to notice what you don't.
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